Wow! Very emotional and well written!

wow, this is superb. I didn't know a word in it (blushes)...rare for me

Unready

Amazing. I really like it, and I can totally relate. In fact you described me almost perfectly, which prolly ain't a good thing, but it's true. Anyways I really enjoyed it.

~Crying Phoenix Tears

Wow. That was really cool. The writing was great, and the format and fonts and all that just proved your point so much better. That was, in short, amazing.

nice. a little on the wierd side, style-wise. but I like it. It gets a little tedious in the middle, but again, I like. Good show. _

its very good but i think it should be less story-ish and it should be a little more abstract. good second poem though D

I like it. I know the feelings here.