Reviews for ventingatfriendship that no l o n g e r exists
the reign chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
amazing. a pledge to freedom. been hurt, yet you still go on strongly. wont let something in your past effect who you are today. chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Oh yay! I write sometimes in this format too! Great job. Read my story "Confliction" and tell me what you think.
Illastic chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. The comments in the parantheses seem to add so much power to your poem.

Wonderful style. I love this.

My fav line (although I have too many to list):

/I will never let you touch me as deeply as hedid/
vampiric-happenings chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
that is sad and scary. did that happen to you? i liked it all the same.