Reviews for Look into the Eyeball
chibicherrychan chapter 4 . 1/12/2006
First school days be damned. You meet some new people the first day and three months later you realize they are idiots. By then the term's over, and you know you'll just be starting over the following term... What am I talking about? These are high school boys; they actually follow pretty much the same group of students for years, so it only really sucks at first...

I still enjoy the smooth progression of this story and am quite intrigued to find out what happened next to Len.

It's great! Keep it up!
Esquirella chapter 4 . 1/11/2006
I like this new friend so far. He's very cool.
Jabberwocky 101 chapter 4 . 1/11/2006
Woo! Another chapter! I like it! I like Connart! Making people confused is fun! write more fast, okay?
Becks-007 chapter 4 . 1/11/2006
Great chapter! Can't wait to see more of Connart, he's great! _
Jabberwocky 101 chapter 3 . 12/23/2005
heheh. Len is cute. I think I love this story. Write more soon!
Esquirella chapter 3 . 12/22/2005
I sense forboding here. I like the drama.
Esquirella chapter 2 . 12/22/2005
Whoa! This is a cool story! I like the narrator.
chibicherrychan chapter 3 . 12/21/2005
That's nice; they share a beautiful friendship, and it's so true that such a seperation is heart-wrenching.

I like how your story flows; it's really smooth and, even though you updated very quickly, it doesn't feel rushed.

Len, I do want to sit and 'listen' to your story, so do tell.

Keep it up.
Becks-007 chapter 3 . 12/21/2005
Aw... Poor Len and Ivan! I know it's some of my fault kinda, but... aw. Len is just so funny! _ I can't wait for the next chapter! Get to it, girl! Just kidding _~ Well... kinda. heh. -.-'
Becks-007 chapter 2 . 12/19/2005
This is soo funny! _ I love Len. Ivan is cute too. I can't wait for the next chapter now that I've finally read this! -.-'
chibicherrychan chapter 2 . 12/18/2005
That was great! Love the interaction protagonist-reader. The humorous side is also well integrated.

Yep, this was very good and, if you can keep it up, it should be an amazing story. It truly has a lot of potential, and I'm not saying that in a "well, that's um... intersting" kinda way. It absolutely pulled me in. I randomly decided to read it, but that is without any regrets.

Do go on!
atadobsessive5345 chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Intriguing. I think that's spelt right. I don't really know though. I have a great ability to spell anything in the world, incorrectly. _

This was a great start, or so I think and since I say so, it shall be...well...okay, maybe I should work on transforming my thoughts into words. They make sense up in my head but come out odd when I write them down _

I wanna read more though so update it son! I love the tone and the first person-ness.
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