Reviews for Waiting For You
VivianEast chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I like this! This explains that waiting can be tough, yes, but guys/girls need to wait, for TRUE love, and that God will show us in time, who that true love is. I hope you find your girl. I'm sure she will be very happy that you waited, and I know God is. :) Have a good day.
Wolfgirl1987 chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Beauitful. Tis the song and story of my heart and desire,
Andreea Chandler chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Aw, that is so sweet! :)

I love how you incorporate the characters' surroundings with their feelings, it's brilliant. Keep up the good work.
NaiRomajin chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
I like it, but it really feels broken up with the seemingly random if the prose was a bit more integrated with the poetry, it would seem more , I can tell this was a very daring piece for you to write. More powa to ya!
CircleStream chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Wow. Very good. You know how hard it is to read a story just like this? I don't think I ever read a story that involves love, romance, and God...all in the same story. ;) It was very sweet, although it was a little...um...maybe a little cheesy, with just the overpowering emotions involved, plus the italics...well, yeah...it was a little much. But still, very sweet-thanks for the read. :-D

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