Reviews for Breaking Free
butterfly-touch chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Oh wow, this is a beautiful piece, and I'm surprise its one of your first poems, because you seem to be like a natural. Well done, keep writing! Love, Ruzz
Aslam chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
i LOVED the analogy you made with the butterfly, and i liked the way you said that the words "i hate you" are so pointlessly thing that absolutely irritates me is people who use those 3words all the time! well done

-aslam