Reviews for More Than an Illusion
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
you gave me the image of something like a rag doll all torn and freyed falling, past best attempts to stay up, and being picked up and mended all stiched up and new again. I really liked this poem, very hopeful and honest. x
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Very well presented images. This flows extremly well. You use your theme well and stray well away from cliched speech. Good write.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
i love this :) the rhyming is great and i relate to it. nice work :D
Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
seems so happy in the its like a bullet to the violent and good.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
I love the last two lines. This is such a beautiful and heartfelt piece. Well done and thanks for your review! QueenVixta
Arichos chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
I love the ryhming, you've done well. Great work
gothmiko chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
AW how sweet.I really like it.