Reviews for Just Because |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You've captured the very essence of teenage high school woes. I love the sarcasm, and the pleas to every deity asking for the school to go up in v. v. big flames. And it's v. coherent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bwahaha :) I like how the tones of your two last chapters combined! Most excellent! Geneva's a very real character. I like her a lot. Please keep writing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what a change from the last chapter! I especially like the first paragraph, it's very realistic and rings true for a lot of people. I like where it's going, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter made me laugh out loud! I love Geneva's witty dialogue, it's so overly dramatic ;). Off to review the next chapter, I am. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice insight into her character. Her brother sounds lovely. Hehe. Can't wait to meet the friend! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sitting here with a tub of haagen dazs going yep, yep, yep, yep. Written very nicely - flows well. Nicely expressed ideas as well. I'm intrigued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, nice start. Hehe. I'm exactly the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this a lot, its really good. i like the additude that you put into the story. keep writing! i wanna know what happans next |