Reviews for Betrayel
Alice Without A Wonderland chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
I thought this was pretty good. I was kinda confused on someparts but I got it.

Oh yea! And I'm Allie's cousin. And thanks for the review. By the way, do you have any ideas for a new name for my story, A Sob Story. Thanks!

Sincerly, Happ Writer
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
WOAH. Very scary and amazing and omg. Just wow. The imagery was great. I love the line "Lies, I taste them" Well I actually love like every line but oh well. Really great. Bravo.
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Excellent, I absolutley loved the lines: Of love and devotionUnending emotion

Those lines caught my eye, Keep it Up!
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
I like the flow of your poem, so subtle. The imagery was beautiful, I can almost imagine the pure girl clad in blue twirling. Somehow enigmatic, I could sense a secret behind the ladies in brown and blue. Excellent job.

Trinity
BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Yay alliteration! You don't see too much of that these days. This poem just makes me happy inside, not sure why. I like the image of a woman in blue dancing. Bad brown lady, Bad! Sit girl!- lol.