|Reviews for Numbing the Roses|
| lady moonlight chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
wow i think this is the best you ever did. It stings me were wounds are still fresh but it also touchs me were many poems can ever touch. I am really crying right now and i am at school i hope no one see me, but then again it is so amazing i don't care. Brava which is what you say to females not bravo, but brava, brava. Never stop writing and i love you. lov's and hugs Allie p.s. still crying
| Singing After Dark chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
ok first of all. this is beautiful. second: I LOVE YOUR CHOICE OF MUSIC! i know thats random. but every single band/singer you put up in your profile, I ADORE. Josh Groban is my hero..and I
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Okay so I'm noticing a theme of angsty-romancey things. I hope nothing horrible just happened to you! Anyway I love it. I love the italics part alot. Just amazing. All three of your recent songs are great. Yay.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
The imagery and the metaphors were simply spectacular. I personally enjoyed the fifth and seventh paragraph, the words you used were powerful enough. Excellent job.
| BlackDreamLily chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
This is quite loverly, but I'm just wondering whether you intended it as a poem or a song. Honestly though, it doesn't really matter cuz you've got some fantastic stuff here.
"It's not Him you should be talking toThe gardner's watching you, little girlWatering the flowers and spreading his liesQueen of Diamonds - she's licking the flames
Oo, midnight's serenading you to sleepAnd the waves are washing up to your shoreWalk into those waves and say good-nightOo, the rhythm's taking you away, darling"
do you mind if I quote you in my profile?