Hey there. Thanks for the review.

I really like this poem- it seems very metaphorical, to me; about loss and trying to fill the voids we feel, and eventually, finding hope and peace. I like the feel of it, the way the images slide through my mind, and the light in the ending. I'm a pretty big fan of hope ;) Nice job!

Take care.

I really enjoyed this, and I especially liked these lines:

'They are the sole remains, you see,

Of my dreams of you.

I let them guide me

Across the dreamless land of green,

Holding patience' hand as I went.'

Beautiful!

Btw, thanks heaps for ze review :D

Hmm... it is lighter-sounding. Very nice though. I'm reminded of the feeling one gets when sitting in a soft candlelight. Loverly.