|Reviews for Virgin Birth|
| Jessie Dee chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Excellent. There's nothing else I can possibly say.
| astral boy chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
I agree, very interesting... something I like about all your writing.
| Sh4d0w chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Interesting point of view
| hardcore chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
powerful! packed with meaning. i adore your works.
| Eboniccinderella chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
WOW.I could interpret that last line to mean...so many things.
| helpless-pretender chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Love it, so simple yet meaningful. That's really cool. Go Jesus! Great Job, keep writing :)
| i am valentine chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
This is way short, but thats all it needed to be. Its way awesome, love it
| Gilee7 chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Hm, I'm not sure what to say about this poem. I'm guessing it's all in reference to the Virgin Mary, but I don't think I quite GET it. However, even though the exact meaning of it flies over my head, it's still a good poem. I prefer your reall long poems, though.
| Herminia chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Nice poem. Very concise, pithy, and touching. Keep up the good work.
| knownbeforetime chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Hey, you just reviewed my poem "The Marriage Prayer". The title of this poem jumped out to me while looking thorugh your profile. I have had these exact same thoughts about the virgin birth myself.
| Ajna chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
This is an interesting take on this particular story. Well done. :)
| Biting My Nails chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
but sadly angst clutches on to me and makes me love your work...not just angst, but the ways your words flow and this story makes me think-what am I thinking, I'm not going to tell you since it probably not what you wanted.
Kept writing. You write beautifully!
| Sapphire Lupe chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Very good, I liked it. Sorry if I offended you with my poem "Thoughts".
| EringoBraugh chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
I think this is the first poem I ever read on fictionpress. wow. I'm also from washington, from bellevue. Kind of a scary poem almost, but I like it. Ive never heard it described at all like that.
| like a lover chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
fascinating... glorious... this is something to be proud of. I love it.