Reviews for Thirty Days
MG777 chapter 11 . 3/5/2016
Can anyone tell me where I can get a copy of this story? It's still not available on Amazon. At least I can't find it... I bought “tangled“ on amazon and loved the book. Now I'd like to read 30 Days but can't find it anywhere.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/1/2016
Try Wattpad! Its a platform much more safer in terms of plagiarizing.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
I would have loved to read this as an Inuyashafanfiction. It sounded so gooood! I was thrilled to read it but as it is now I have no interest in it. :/ Is it still somewhere as an InuKag fanfic? because I'd really like to read it...
Kattya chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This is really good and I would love to continue reading it so I'll be joining plagiarism haven!
marshak chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
**"So who's
this guy?" I inquired to my father shoving a
forkful of eggs into my mouth..."This,
McCarthy, is my daughter, Layla. Layla, I would
like for you to meet your fiancé, Keegan

Thats Huhlarrious! I'm surprised she didn't choke on her breakfast...even though I thought I knew it was coming, it still made me *gasp*.
Catrissa chapter 5 . 4/1/2012
Why was it removed?
Catrissa chapter 5 . 4/1/2012
Why was it removed?
bluefairycool chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I absolutely loved this story! Finished it many years ago, as well as your sequel, and still remember it (almost)! Your writing style was brilliant, keeping my attention the entire way through.

Although it's been quite some time since then, so I can only assume your talent has grown. It's a shame you were forced to remove your work because of the selfish actions of others, it ruins it for you and others.

I'm guessing you'd never consider posting on here again? (the sequel that is). I'd love to re-read you work, but PH doesn't seem to want me :(

Good luck in publishing this! I can't wait till I can buy myself a copy!
aRUShtotheheadlikebRainFReeeze chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
Love the name Keegan! This story is pretty funny and it moves at a nice fast pace.

There are so many things wrong with your main characters which is what makes me like them so much. They are as annoying and selfish as most people tend to be which makes them so real and loveable.
aRUShtotheheadlikebRainFReeeze chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
The mental dialogue to real dialogue transition is done remarkably well. After some of the stories I have read this is a major blessing.

The lavender smell from Vinci turned me off a little after working up to such a nice sexy fantasy in my head.

I love your main characters. They are bitchy, but with good reason. A necessary bi-product of staying relatively good when gorgeous and wealthy.

That end bit where she hears the news and then falls on her bed was hilarious. I pictured a girl version of Captain Jack Sparrow when he is drunk. She just spins around and stumbles away before passing out.
keirahime chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Hi I was one of the lucky ones who were able to read Thirty days when it was up on fanfiction, and I was going through my reviews there and when I saw my review for it I wanted to reread it again, and that was when I saw that you took it off there and had an original version. I was so excited to read an original version of the story because it was so amazing with Inu and Kagome. I was so disheartened to see that someone was stealing your work.

I really do want to read this story again with your original characters so hopefully you really do get it published so that I can go and get a copy! It was such a well written and engaging story. Haven't found any good ones lately on here so it sucks that your was taken off cause of idiots who can't write their own stories!

Good luck with your future in writting, I can tell it will go far and I will definitely support you when you do publish your work! :D
XDXP chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
pretty awesome while it lasted!
Tsukiii chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Yeah you rock ;) Like it, I want to know who's her future husband
XXhomosapienXX chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
i see, sorry about the stealing... was a pleasure reading the beginning of a masterpiece! haha
XXhomosapienXX chapter 3 . 3/30/2011
why did u remove ur chapters for 30 days? It was just getting good... ya left me hanging..
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