Reviews for falls on me
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
good poem. unique & intresting.
account not in use chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
home is where the heart is...which is an odd thought. we love so many people. they are our homes. my god.
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Oh God... getting worse by the minute, extremely bitter is this one.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
This poem really makes me imagine whats happening even though its fairly short. Brilliant as always.

ANNA
Decollage chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Vauge... but beautiful all the same.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
"A lover’s tear-soaked sky in shades of loss" that was a beautiful line. nice job writing this.
JoyfullyStruggling chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
beautiful