|Reviews for please|
| shadow-spirit chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
i always envy writers who can say a little and meen a lot - u dont waist words adn it makes ur writing all the more interesting - i like the use of mundane imagery like used cigerettes juxtaposed with the abstract personification of death breathing. the last line is intreagueing and powerfull
| Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
short but doesn't end leaving the reader wanting more. good job.
| Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Pained... immensely painful.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
this whole thing was perfectly written. i liked it. : )
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
I've read alot of your poems on the just in page and you have a very interesting style, its beautiful.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
it's like a fond longing, and i love it