Reviews for A Lost Soul
phthalo blue chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
A cliche title but an amazing poem! You got me with the dancing and then kept me until the neon lights.
Blazing Icecrystals chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Amazing. It's funny how one word can start such a work of art.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Very good descriptions. I really like "midnight ballerina". It makes her sound eerily pretty even though the whole meaning of it that she's a stripper.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
ecdysiast sounds like it should mean something beautiful, but no! honestly, words should mean what they sound like. anyway, i like this. great work :D