Reviews for And then there were Shadows
AubriannaKnight chapter 34 . 1/20/2007
Yay... Storm got some sense knocked into him and is back. I'm so glad Monique didn't die. I was really worried there for a little bit. I actually teared up a little.

OMG.. I was so happy and excited that Jessica was finally going to hook up with Winston and told him that she loves him. I can't believe that the cops, her dad out of all people arrested him and saw her like she was. I hope he breaks free of the cops and jail. He can just telaport. away. He can fight to, but he might not want to fight Jessica's dad. Or what if he uses vampire mind powers to make them forget. If the cops don't forget and some things don't get done Winstan's gonna be on the run. Well at least we know what he's been trying to keep secret from Jessica.
akaCHEEKS chapter 34 . 1/9/2007
omg... hey all i'm wondering is that... is their mother a vampire? i mean you left us clues a while back in the beginning but then now i don't even know anymore... is she in a coffin somewhere sleeping peacefully with a stake in her heart?
AubriannaKnight chapter 33 . 1/6/2007
I'm excited with the progression of the story and also a nervous wreck in worry for monique. I hope her baby is ok, I hope she will be ok (Good luck Monique), and God please let Storm show up on time. At least to tell her his mistake and fix their misunderstanding. If Monique died it would be sad, he would have a guilty concious if he doesn't get to talk to her, and then he would have to raise his son. I think if you have everyone of the characters end up happy and together in the end it might be like any other story and to easy even though I my self wish that Everything will be ok, but sometimes in life that doesn't happen so if you put a sad twist onto it, the story would be a little deeper but way way sad. There are so many way things can turn out.. I can't wait to see what you do next..

One of the things I love about your writing is how you are able to tell the other character's point of veiw and their stories and still have everything flow so nicely. You are doing and excellent job.
Le Luna chapter 33 . 12/29/2006


you left it like that

how could you?

i loved your story. although one thing i could say is that you need a beta. there are alot of little mistakes in there.

but that's okay :]

if you ever want a beta let me know.


1. after reading fangs and broomsticks first it was nice to see them back like this. subtle change from the sequel to f&b.

2. Winston and Jessica BETTER get back together. OR ELSE you will feel the wrath of my almighty sporks :P

3. Misunderstandings are so aggravating.. Storm better get his but back to Monique.

4. Genesta and Jamie confuse me to no end.

5. Gerard and Craig. ! yaoi(that's a japanese word) :P love it.

6. Decadence. in general her character is like a puzzle. but it's intruiging to try and figure her out every time she appears.

7. you BETTER update soon. pretty pwease?

8. i can not wait untill you update.
akaCHEEKS chapter 33 . 12/28/2006
omg... i bet the baby will die.. omg.. omg.. haha iono.. i just want it to die.. cause what if it turns out to be a devil you know? jeez..
akaCHEEKS chapter 32 . 12/4/2006
wow! wellz at least he knows that storm got monique pregnant right? omg! craig is so funny! "WHO KNOCKED UP MY SISTER?" just because their at a baby gap store doesn't mean anything... oh wait.. craig practically knows everything about his sister huh? so they wouldn't happen to have a baby cousin or nothing.. and didn't storm got monique pregnant when he was in love with her? or do they have to acknowledge it and they have to mentally know it? or is it ok if they love them but didn't realize it yet? iono! this is soo interesting! swear!
akaCHEEKS chapter 31 . 10/28/2006
haha that's probably gerard and craig man! lolz! can't wait for the next update!
AubriannaKnight chapter 31 . 10/25/2006
AWE... Things are falling apart left and right.. I MISS, Winston.. Please come back! I'll give you lots o' fun yummy blood if you come back to Jessica.. lol
Shadow Creature chapter 30 . 9/22/2006
Aw, poor Gerard! so sad, yay for chapters!
whateva123 chapter 30 . 9/17/2006
it was a superb chapter i think it was great. the wistan part was sad when jessica was dening that she luved update soon.
CatNap chapter 30 . 9/17/2006
ehehe ... well that was disturbing, i don't think I was able to follow one thing craig or gerard did just now...
akaCHEEKS chapter 30 . 9/16/2006
i think that the baby that monique is having is the person that will try and kill jessica.. and monique will somehow die or something.. iono.. and storm will be really guilty.. so yeah.. haha lolz!
CatNap chapter 29 . 9/6/2006
one word. Woot. XD
OverXTheXEdge chapter 29 . 9/6/2006
NICE! AWESOME! no other words to describe it. And nice touch with the whole hospital trip! It was comic and perfect! Can't wait til the next chapter.
whateva123 chapter 29 . 9/5/2006
nice soon.
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