Reviews for Twists and Turns
Uncle Rupert chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
hello there, thought i'd give you a useless review.

at the start you have this line that bugged me. -It was my first day at Cape Bay High. (I'm a senior though).-

i personally hate when brackets are placed in stories. it's like you didn't know where to put a line so you stuck it in brackets so it doesn't matter. it's one of thos dumb things that annoy me, funny i wouldn't ven notic a spelling error but brackets i do. so i thought i would advise a restructure of the sentence - It was my first day as a senior at Cape Bay High. -

other then that one tiny thing it is a good start ;)
cerasylvania chapter 22 . 11/4/2008
like it alot
cerasylvania chapter 22 . 8/25/2008
i loved this so much and if you havent a name for the sequel how about "thrills and chills" you know depends on the story though so a suggestion for the title is in the quotes.
Frigid-bitch chapter 11 . 6/30/2007
Hi... I've been reading your story and all, but sorry this is the only time I've reviewed. Just that the chapters are really short and there isn't "that" much to coment on I guess... And plus I didn't read it online. lol. I print the stuff off. :3

So... I like the story line. lol. Think it's funny, BUT I don't see how someone would have enough time to be a 'janitor/student' at a school. You wouldn't be able to do that... o_O; Anyways, and what's with the whole Greg turned to Jacob thing? lol. If you want to change his name then just edit the damn story. It would be a lot better. And the typos are... well a lot of them.

Other than that... I like the idea. And I wish you luck with any other writing you've got planned. If you ever need any help don't be shy, ask.

Oh... And I bet you'd like my story 'Burn myself in you' lol :]
AJS chapter 21 . 5/21/2007
Ohh wow haha I didn't even realize that this was over! Jacob & Sam are cute together though (: Especially towards the end. Hm... she never actually explicitly said that she liked him as well though. It actually came as a shock to me because I was thinking something along the lines like he was kind of a player or something since he started making out with her so early on in the story, and he's so playful and teasing too, but I guess that was just towards her. It's cute though, and I liked it a lot :)

What were those noises from the closet then when they weren't talking? The Summer thing was kind of confusing because at first I thought that Summer liked Jacob as well? Haha, I don't know. I thought that April might have been a problem because she liked Jacob as well, but she turned out to be pretty supportive so that was good :) It also seemed like Dave liked Sam there for a while... :x

I like Sam & Jacob together a lot though. Why did it say Greg on his janitor outfit? Lol. I agree though - Jacob is a much better name :D Haha. Anyways, this is a cute story. I'll keep an eye out for the sequel!

- Alyssa
nekomiko chapter 4 . 3/26/2007
what is the "only look"?
Tecna chapter 21 . 10/3/2006
YES! I have finally finished reading, from the start, I just absolutely LOVE this story, it's totally, amazing. So superb that I could read it all over again and secondly, I love all those fluff scenes in the fic, and the coupling is awesome! I can't wait to see what next year brings either. Love it! Lol!
Hope.And.What.Not chapter 22 . 8/28/2006
a title for the next sequel i think should be using the same type of words from the first title

you proberly have no idea what im saying but i said it anyway becaus ei like to type :)

True Calling
Mallie chapter 21 . 8/13/2006
I'm so proud of my best friend :) I finally caught up with everything - and I'm just so proud of you! And I'm gonna be posting my story up soon (I think in a week). Anyways, mucho love - I love the character! She thinks like I think, haa. Anyways.. yeah! Congrats on a work well done!
Mallie - Translucent Rose chapter 20 . 7/11/2006
Gosh Debface, to think I found your story even searching. Congrats on the 60 reviews, I love you dearface bestfriendever for a job well done. I'm so proud of you, and I can't wait til you have a new story.

But seriously kid. "Outside the nurse’s office was Kevin’s ex and Jacob kissing." Man. Update or I shall spam your homephone with like a zillion messages.

But then again, it's called Twist & Turns for a reason. Haa, I remember when it was still "Principal's Son." Com'on. haa. & Jacob is still an official evil name, no matter what. You know the backround to that one haa.
Early October chapter 7 . 7/9/2006
Nice work chapter 20 . 7/9/2006
oh man, is Jacob in for a trashing? Update.
ME chapter 20 . 7/9/2006
omgosh! plz, plz, plz tell me that you got you names mixed up when you had jacob kissing kevin's ex. omgosg omgosh! i ca't happen. otherwise i love your story!1 it's awsome! update super soon!
let me scream my heart out chapter 20 . 7/9/2006
dun dun dun omg why why? why? jacob is not like that omg come on hes in love with sam it's obvious so y'd you make it so he kisses another girl no that cannot happen no no no
Hope.And.What.Not chapter 20 . 7/9/2006
I hate you, In a good way. Is that possible. Its is now. Although i guess this chapter ending is perfectly resonable. Its is named twist and turns after all. What else can i say?

True Calling
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