Reviews for Morality
undisclosed chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
amazingly philosophical, with great imagery, esp. the frozen waters. wonderful poem!
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
i love this - really original and powerful. great work!
t3h Butterzfly of Nothing chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Beautiful. Loved it. Mortality, immortality, they both have their edges, no?
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
I like this poem, and I especially like the poisioned apple and frozen water imagery. So desolate and painful. Very nice, very realistic. Your first lines are great: "Lifted above ethics / I become immortal." Nice job.
Infection chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
this was superbly written. loved the power it possessed.