Reviews for The Light
Thyrt chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
i like this
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
i love this; the simple lines and repetition could have been annoying, but in this poem they work to make it poignant and sad... great work.
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
I like the use of repititioon in this poem: interesting. I quite like the imagery as well, adn teh new sentence between teh repeated 'when will the light appear from this tunnel?' Very well done