|Reviews for Poems of Pain|
| in theory chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I've come across you before, I'm sure I have (bleh I KNOW I have!). Your bio was so interesting, I'm a dreamer too (I wrote down a transcript kinda type thing of one of my dreams, "Urchin.")
Your style is so crisp, I'd review all of this but I'm at college in a lesson right now so I'll scoot now and finish up later.
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 10 . 1/14/2006
I...You're telling my story with that poem! Betrayal is a foul, loathsome, hurtful, spiteful, horribe thing! Forgive them though, just don't give anymore to them. Forgive them for yourself, not them. For closure. I speak from expierience. Good poem, no great poem, I'm adding it to my faevs
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 9 . 1/14/2006
:( I love your metaphores. Alot! They're great. Really good. But, so sad...:(
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 8 . 1/14/2006
o_0 your mother? Oh no! I...good poem...*worries more*
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 7 . 1/14/2006
Again, I can really relate. Its like your soul's being suffocated, right? Great poem.
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 6 . 1/14/2006
Intense. Love it. Excellent. REally, you have an amazing gift for words!
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 5 . 1/14/2006
Oh man! I can so relate to this one. Really good job-
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 4 . 1/14/2006
:( Heavy stuff. Again brilliant, but...well you DID say you were over it...*worries*
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 3 . 1/14/2006
*Hugs* my friend, waht the hell happened to make you feel all these things! *Plans to hunt down and kill them* The poetry is, dare I say as always, great. But damn, don't let someone do that to you again...
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 2 . 1/14/2006
This reminds me strangley of Evanescence and their latest album, Anywhere But Home...Again really well done. I'm also glad you got all theese emotions onto paper and not bottled up. You're too talented to be bottling up emotions.
| glamorous-giggly-guy chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Oh wow! I likies alot! Wow wow wow! Uh...well done. Damn you're talented.
| LittleMidgett chapter 9 . 1/10/2006
Interesting...like the whole bit with the glass and all...very cool...
Glad you don't feel like that anymore...at times...:P...I think...I dunno what I'm saying...oops...
| Faerie Energy chapter 9 . 1/10/2006
Ohh, I love the imagery when you're talking about being pressed up against glass... Wonderfully dark. Great work.
With all due respect,
| Sakura Reyna chapter 8 . 12/13/2005
Poems with no titles are okay. My mother is same way...
| Sakura Reyna chapter 7 . 12/13/2005
...breathless and yet beautiful