| Reviews for Somethin Fierce |
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   young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 ah, this is so new age, and i love it. the second stanza and the line, "he wears name brand love on his sleeve," is just so poetically blunt. great job. |
| One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 3/31/2008 How pretty. Starkly poetic. The beauty in this story is its despairing romanticism. It ties in with your name - 'Faithless Juliet'. It's sad and - I hate this word but it suits - bittersweet. "Father of a million fainting girls" - that's like milk to me, it's just a gorgeous phrase. I'm off to check out more of your work. This is definitely favourited. |
| bittersweet.season chapter 1 . 11/3/2007 this is beautiful. not superfluous at all, and really frank. i like it. |
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/2/2007 this is really good. |
| a Leader by Default chapter 1 . 12/19/2006 How good was this! perfection. (fierce) |
| Kouichi chapter 1 . 8/8/2006 Yet another brilliant poem. |
| evm chapter 1 . 3/22/2006 Your rhythm is wonderful, like a steady beat of rain. It caught me up and tossed me around so that I was tangled in all of your beautiful phrases. This is so gorgeous. My favourites were the repetition of the lines begining with 'Romeo said:' and 'Something else. Something Vain. A boy without a train of thought.' All in all, this is wonderful. |
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 3/16/2006 oh wow. wow. that's all i can say. this is amazing. beautiful. -sunshine |
| Margot Tenenbaum chapter 1 . 2/9/2006 you are . |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006 this is good i cannot find the words to describe it!~SarahJane |
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 1/14/2006 I can't decide if this is negative or positive. There's something very odd in his words. Too much hoping on the speaker's part. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2006 i love that line: reasoning's that he bought on sale at an outlet store. He wears name brand love on his sleeve. ) |
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 1/6/2006 A very impressive piece of work you got here. It's very different from all the others that I've read from other poets. Very well done. |
| AshGurl2897 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005 Wow. You have quite the body of work on here. It's very impressive indeed. I liked this very much. The disjointedness was nice and helped to get the idea across. Alright, I am off to read and possibly review some more of your poems. |
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/28/2005 it's bittersweet...i like the use of (somethin fierce) without the "g" at the end. i picture romeo like elvis? anyways, nicely done. really well-written. p. reading your review of "bob dylan and green carpet..." i realized that you're right, it does end at a weird place, and i never saw that before. so thank you, for pointing that out to me, because i'm going fix it and give it a proper ending now. |