The imagery is excellent and the free verse format makes it so smooth and it feels so comfortable. A superb piece of work.

oh wow. I love the imagery put forth here, and your words ring solid in a defined world as the 4th wall crashs to a halt. Beautifully done, and overall an excellent work as always!

This hip-hop, slanting, freeform rhythm, and I'm massively in love with it. Good repetition on "Romeo said"; I love, "So let me go.", and "I grew up with his face pinned on my pillowcase". Suddenly Romeo is this onstage wonder.

This is wonderful.

My only issue is a tiny thing, "Romeo said: now darling close you'RE", should be "your". Just a tiny little grammar bit, easily fixed. Other than that.. well, you just blew me away.

This is amazing. I love this one a lot... I don't even know how to describe what I love about this."Reasoning's that he bought on sale at an outlet store. He wears name brand love on his sleeve." those lines are so perfect, everything just fits in this so have such talent, keep it up.