|Reviews for Slipping Tears|
| CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
the mixed feelings between holding on and letting them live their life is very well expressed here, can feel a real honest tone about this poem. _ keep it up
| Faerie Energy chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
It's not great or anything, but it's an averagely decent poem. Very sweet. Good work.
with all due respect,Faerie Energy
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
aw... quite endearing in a way~ touching~ good work
| Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Intense and really well-written! I picture this girl at her knees with emotions bubbling out and holding her leaving bf by the leg. You've done this well. And back to you on Merry Christmas!
| Lakoria chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
lol I loved it. Whether you that it was good are not, it was wonderful. Nice rythme. I liked your words. It was just good. Keep it up!
God bless, Lakoria
| Arichos chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
You give a real good point of view here with the girl. I like it alot, as it conveys a good feeling of both sadness and love.
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
beautiful etched in sorrow.
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
I liked the poem, I don't get why you said you thought it was not all that great, I liked it!
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
i love it, really it isnt too rhyming and still flows mature and stately.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
you capture this so well.
| Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
i sound like such a woman when i say this and i'm a guy, but, Iv'e been there, feeling like my ex was leaving me when i was falling in love with her. I've been hurt so many times, I'm a lot more reserved then i should be and it bothers me. good work, very emotional, very powerful.
| Tecna chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I enjoyed this poem, it's really heartfelt and touching, enjoyed it!