I love the 'there's no i in tease'.You're a very creative and original person.

i adored this. i love peices like this. they're just... so cute & you've got amazing skill. i envy you so much, because this was fantastisch.

Genius. I love your writing more than I can express.

i really liked the 5th verse... & the 3rd. you did a really nice job with this. beautiful.

Wow. Amazing. "'you inTrigue me' he said, with a capital T" - I love that line. Also "she would burst, spill pulp fiction down his chin like pomegranate juice". I love the way your images aren't what you would expect, but they work so well. Lovely.

holyshit. this was beyond, way beyond, anything i've ever reasd here. theres so much underlying emotion that mkaes you ssquirm uncomfortably and so much beautiful apathy at the asme time and GOD! i think i love you.

Very nice. I was expecting something different when you said 'cheshire', as I have my own 'cheshire' poem, and they are very different, thank god. I like yours better, it has style, it has body. It also has some kick-butt description, and some awesome flow. Good job, I loved it!