Reviews for The Darkness
CynSparot chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
hey this was really good and i enjoyed the subject matter
A. Metzger chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Very true. But will this poem have any affect? Probably not. Dont take this as disrespect, i'm just proving your point. The darkness is inevitable.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
creepy, but it's interesting. nice work.
puddleoftears chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
i really like this one, its really good
bluud-reign chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Wow. That's good, sad but so good. It seems like the perfect description for the world's destruction, as well!
Novocaine Addiction chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
This is very well rhyme scheme doesn't beat you over the head with a metal bat.I like it. .
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
This runs and flows well. Like, "Evil is growing,-and no light is glowing", very good description of the abstract Evil.
Herminia chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Nice poem. Very well written. Good job!
Harleen Napier chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Really liked the flow of this.
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Interesting poem, the few rhyming lines inbetween the non-rhyming ones put the poem off a bit though, other then that, good job!
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
i like the line about the shadows growing and hope shrinking. i have a clear image of that in my written.
Hate In The Form Of Passion chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Wow. The imagery is really good and it had that eery vibe in just a few lines. Good job.
FlameintheFlood chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
scary and amazing. great job.
Choke on this chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
good topic. should revise the present-past shift... or is that on purpose?
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
the last three lines were great. wonderful job with this.
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