Reviews for Rain at Soccer
drippingdreams chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
It just got better as it went along and the ending was just like WHOA. It was deep, but clever at the same time. I also rather like "air made cubic," as that's just SO your style of description. :)
Raspberry Twirl chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
magical and abstract, great painting of memory lane! You looked at life eye to eye. wow!

lots of smiles, raspberry twirl

p.s. thank you for your review!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
Wow, I agree that the ending is just POW! in your face. Gorgeous poem. You have talent! Keep writing! :)
bubblesugarsocks chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Thanks for the review-I like this poem. And don't fret about imaging... i do it, too. I can just make fun of it.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
wow the ending hits you so hard.
Lines To Time chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
I love you, I love this, and don't you love how poetry can make the smallest things seem so wonderful? Or rather, it expresses their innate wonder, which the poet is fortunate enough to see, and the reader fortunate enough to see through the poet's eyes. I am glad to be your reader :-P.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
The religion of our bodies; nature, air, water, life. I think when we open our eyes wide enough we could see God (in whatever form or shape Godliness takes.)