Reviews for paper stained confection
like a lover chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
an attempt? girl this is GORGEOUS.

I'm totally in love with it. please never try to excuse your amazing/breathtaking/intoxicating writing
in tesseraction chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
a delicious amount of room to interpret. lovexcore (!1)

pink floyd reference at the end? or none whatsoever?
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
I liked this. Nice images, good feeling to it.
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
the beginning is magnificent although it kind of fades nearer to the end. i like to scan your work from time to time. havent done it in a while, i see youve changed ur name. happy new year! - the Lady Elaine
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
wondering if I like fairy(fly)-minced flowers/and autopsies on (brain-)damaged sheep.

i like how the ending seems random, but somehow it fits.

i really admire the whole of this poem, actually.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
interesting.. cool format.. very abstract and well done
hoowdoideletethisaccount chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
Huh? Haha, sometimes I feel so stupid when I read poetry. I know the whole point of poetry is the symbolism and evasiveness, in some sense. This one makes sense to me, except for the last line. I'm not sure what it has to do with anything ;) I love your descriptions, though. They're elaborate, but effortless. Nicely done!
dusk orchid chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Hm... this is quite interesting. Sort of like an abstract, detached feeling. The images you chose can be interpreted in many ways. Nice piece.
ShadesofBlue69 chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
weird, but delicate, i like it alot.
Unready chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
confusing to me .
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
hah, the title tickles me.

stardust is such a beautiful throughout the and fairies.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
i like this. i like the word combination and the ideas it brings to mind. you could definitely expand on this if you so choose.
after-sex cigarette chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
crazycool imagery.
as beauty dies chapter 1 . 12/13/2005

I fangirl you shamelessly now.

lovely, lovely, lovely. this is such an amazing poem. so beautiful and pretty in only ways you can make it plausable. lovely, lovely, lovely.

~* noelle
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