|Reviews for mermaid lagoon eyes|
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I LOVE the last line. It's so powerful and innocent and striking and wow. Great poem.
| Cordelia Riordan chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Wow. That is some beautiful imagery and I love the way you used symbolism. Good job. :)
| phthalo blue chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Amazing. Just amazing. I love "she dropped her silver things" and the last line. Beautiful.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
'she's all raw and the salt water's stinging' wow. that was beautiful. i could smell& see it&feel it. 'and even if you drained her margarita bath (suffocating-in-here)' & that was another beautiful line. 'alligator scale-tears' brings a whole new meaning to crying.& the last line was just perfect. : ) it made the poem even more awesome (which is hard to believe since it's already .)wonderful. i lovedlovedloved this.