Reviews for Rhythm
524120 chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
This was awesome. It has a really good rhythm. Feels like I was there experiencing the same things. You used the punctuation well to create that feeling of precision and abrupt movement.
Official Rambler chapter 2 . 2/15/2006
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We miss you too, Kim-chan!
Official Rambler chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Oh. Wow. That was really, really cool. I got flashbacks to when I was in karate. You could really feel the rhythm in the poem, just like in martial arts.
Shadowhound chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
wow...i picked up on the adrenalin rush. that is not cool. i'm sitting in a chair in front of a computer, trying to relax after a stressful day, and now i want to go run a marathon! good job, i need the exercise. annyywaay, good poem. you do an excellent job letting the reader see it through your eyes. as i said before, it makes me think i am there watching these things. makes me want to do a poem for marching band... that wouldn't work...oh well, you almost inspired me to do something stupid, nothing new poem. i hope you have a very merry christmas. never a happy holiday. always christmas.