I absolutely love it.

i think it's been said about 20 times, but with this many writers in about 20 different ways. In short I'll make it simple as you did but, sadly not as profound,

"that was purty"

Smiles :)

Your poetry is lovely and so sad. I hope you continue writing, for it makes me thoughtful to read your words. By the way, Thank you for your review.

I like its simplicity. It's overall a really good poem, and I don't have anything negative to say about it. I like the second half better than the first half, though. Good job.

Great summary or whatever ya wanna call it. It summed up the circumstances perfectly. I dont remember the word "pray" in the poem, though. did ya add it?

That's lovely! I loved the imagery you used.

This poem in particular, though short, is one of my favorites. It's got rhythm, and the "one pearl teardrop" painted a picture in my head.

Very nice. It's a beautiful image, almost dream-like in quality. The rhyme was also done very well. It was hard to pick up on the first time I looked this over, but I caught it the second time. That makes this even more amazing because a good rhyming poem isn't necessarily an obvious rhyme. (Shakespear rhymed, but tried not to make it obvious.) Amazing job!

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thank you for the review on "The Little Wildflower Girl."

This is a gorgeous poem, however I felt the transition of "tore it in two/In two? What a cliche" wasn't needed, and a bit jarring/antithetical to the poem itself. That being said, it was beautifully written. I love short poetry, and especially the last line in this really sold the deal for me. Again, that delicate touch that was so prevalent in your most recent submission. And this, of course: "And it melted into glass/One pearl teardrop"

Excellent, and stunning. You haven't nearly enough submissions. I demand more.

I love the title! well said.

i would say short and sweet, but the others have done that for me('.') good poem though, short and sweet, like it!

I wasn't sure what to expect from this poem... but I liked it simple and elegant.

great work,~Sejse~

Wow. It's so short and kind of simple, but I love the imagery. For some reason the word graceful comes to mind. I just really like it!

I loove this one! "My soul was but a grain of sand/And it melted into glass" What cool imagery! Great job.

Hey, "Rasberry," it's me again! So you put this poem in the spritual category as well. I guess it is. I liked where this poem went after the first line!