Reviews for Better
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Um, really?

Like the metaphors in the first and second stanzas. Good job.

Flies chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Which is not really true, but in so many cases it's hard to tell why things like "love" even matter. So I can understand it. You seemed to be in a consise-to-the-point poetry sort of roll... I'm liking it.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
leaves a bittersweet taste. good work.