Reviews for The Nutcracker's Sweet |
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![]() ![]() Very well written. I like the imagery and merging of familiar versions of the story into one. Good job! I hope you keep writing if you like it! |
![]() ![]() Now that's a nutcracker fic! Like the 1990 Nutcracker Prince. Best time start sequel. |
![]() ![]() OMGosh how cute! XD |
![]() ![]() I love this |
![]() ![]() Well the plot says how beautiful Pirlipat was but i think it was tge opposite: Pirlipat was a pervy, stereotypical looking dumb blonde while hans is SO HOT! |
![]() ![]() i love this!i cnt wait to show this to my sister, we have always been big fans of the nutcracker prince,we watch the movie every |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was beautifully well done and it really made me smile. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH my gosh what a beautifully written story. The blend was seamless and the characters spot on. The nutcracker has been one of my favorite stories growing up and dancing and I can appreciate the thought put into the ending. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! You've captured the essence of the ballet, and also allowed the background of the story to be revealed, and you cleverly chose when to put in the flashbacks. Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I really, really enjoyed it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ivealways been very confused about the nutcracker. i no longer am. yay!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE! (k, just so you know, when I'm sleepy, that's pretty much the only word I can think of to describe something I like... and I'm sleepy.. I'll read this again tomorrow... *pinky promise*) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my... that was wonderful! I wish I could live in a fairy tale like that... *sigh*. It was written beautifully; the style really did sound like an old fairy tale being told. I lved it. The only mistake I saw in the whole thing (though I was admittedly distracted by the story) was the very first sentence: "...getting to know her that Clara that she was the sweetest child..." Your grammar is a little confused there... need to take out a "that, or something. But that's all. Beautiful job! |