Reviews for The Great Struggle
Muted Dragon chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
repetition of 'dread'; "sisters, you"; repetition of idea of shaming father, compared to unjust lust; "overcome" not "over come"; commas before each "sir"; "Well" ; commas before " if in sentence- like 'and he said, "where.. etc.. where is this story going?