Reviews for Odors Of
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
This would be lovely read aloud - you've got some great images here!
notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
do I detect a note of sarcasm? Quite subtle, actually, I really like it.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Wow. Lovely abstract stuff you've got there. Poignant is the word! _
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
Excellent and vivid imagery, and realistic enough that you can feel the emotion behind this. Good job.

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Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
this is woven together well, very colorful and the images jump out because they are unique. good write.