Reviews for Melody and Carter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was so excited to see you update (and 2 chapters at that!) I'm really liking the progression of their relationship. I liked this chapter. Melody comforting Carter and offering some perspective to his situation was nicely written. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story. so glad your back on it! also, i love pale yellow! great choice! haha keep up the good work luv! |
![]() ![]() yay :) i like how they're both changing each other but in good ways. And I also want to punch Whitney in her stuck up nose. I'm so glad you updated. Keep it a trend! I love this story more and more with every chapter I read. So don't leave me hanging! :) |
![]() ![]() Yay, an update. I haven't really been checking up on the stories I read on here. But, I'm curious to see how this story goes. I hope you continue it. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is a wonderful story, with great fleshed out characters. I hope you will be able to continue it when you can. |
![]() ![]() Oh, they were so sweet. :) I hope things work out. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like the story, keep it coming please please please *puppy eyes* :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a nice & cozy story... and you leaving it hanging at a turning point. But, I like how it is easy to read and I would love to see this story completed. It seems from Chapter 13's review you have already got a plan for Melody and Carter, but something is stopping you from completing it? A change of outline? Ennui? Writer's Block? Anyways, I hope you will bring this story out of hiatus after you get your other story sorted out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the hints to the future and and theories on love in the end of these two chapters. |
![]() ![]() I had a night of suffering from insomnia. I would like to thank you, and your story for helping me keep busy. The story is quite good. I enjoyed it so far. Disappointed there is no recent update, it is such a good story. It'd be such a waste to not finish it. I'll look for an update here and there. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Please update soon...such a good story and it wuld b a shame 2 leave it unfinished... |
![]() ![]() I love this story! Please keep it up. We all want another chapter. ;) |
![]() ![]() i really like this story and how they are so different from one another. hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() Update now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Splendid! I love Carter. And Derek...he reminds me of this guy my brother works this, but only in name since I've never talked to my brother's co-worker. AHEM. I'm going to be following this story so avidly it may seem like stalking. Please, don't be alarmed. :) Good work, D.S. Cillian |