Reviews for Surpise, surprise
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
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Dinosaurs R Dead chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Aw :) so sweet
gyvareva chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
That was a really good story. It's just too bad it's only a one-shot, it so could be developed into a full story.

I loved the characters.
DNAstar chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
aw thats cute
learntosayhello chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
AW, that is too cute! That is too adorable! Oh, Henry is just amazing, and I love how you wrote this, you're amazing at what you do. This was great, thank you for sharing! :D
Glitchie chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
That was really cute.
Uncle Rupert chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Gosh that was adorable. Kenny was such a sweet heart, the perfect knight in shining armour, henry is going to be one lucky boy. ;p Good little piece. very cute.
Teldra chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
This is sweet :)
mousegirl05 chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Well, I say 'HooRAH!' for adorible jock-stalkers. *laughs* This was a perfect little one-shot. I liked it. I was trying to come up with what specifically I liked about it, but it's late and right now all I've got is 'I liked it'. I enjoyed Kenny's character a lot, and could totally sympathize with Henry's. I like how you witheld his name initially. Nice touch. (Oh look! Something specific that I liked...) Endings that read like 'beginnings' (like this one) are great-it lets the story live on, and in my opinion, that's the best. Cheers!
Colorpen chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
short but cute, looks like a beginning i want to know more about:P
Lunecee-pyon chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Hehehe, what a sweet story. Though, Im not really satisfied with the ending. No kisses n stuff? Pft.
Desmond.Ry chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Hey Esquirella, I need more of this story. please. hehe :D
CinderellaWithCombatBoots chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
So. I sort of now understand why you pointed out and warned people it was a one-shot before they read the story. So they wouldn't get attached, haha. Well. Bad luck, buddy. No, but seriously! I want a fully blown story! Ugh. I always did have the worst luck. I liked Henry's diary, notebook thing. I always had one of those things when I have to go to the hospital and I'd just sit and stick photos and write comments and bits of poetry, little cartoon drawings and quotes that I like, concert tickets and just stupid things like one of my best friend's bracelets. He has them all the way up his arms, he won't miss it, haha. But I wouldn't call it a scrapbook, because it's not as impersonal as that, but it's not as personal as a diary, either. So. It's journal/notebook thing. That is it's official name. But visiting hours are only so long so...I have to find something to do. It's nice, sitting looking through it with all my friends and boyfriend, laughing at all the memories and great days we've had. Oh. I don't know if you noticed or not, but the name to this story is 'Surpise Surprise' thought I'd add it in before I forgot. Anyways. Back to the story. I like the fact that Kenny isn't the average 'centre-of-the-crowd' jock you always are reading books about and watching movies with them dating the head cheerleader. You'd think God have pre-ordained it. Wow steretyping sucks. I mean, if I actually took notice of people's snide comments I would be the geeky, bi, awkward, scene/emo girl or whatever. I don't mind being that, if it's me. I just happen to think it isn't. Well, okay, the first two are right sometimes, yes, but geeky is the new cool, dude. And I am bisexual, so...yeah. But I am NOT scene or emo or whatever. Screw them. But I love little Henry's name! It's so cute :] Haha. Seriously. I can just imagine his character in my head and the name is perfect for him. Aw, he woulda been a cute kid. But. I liked reading the story, bit of a mixed reaction at the one-shot fact (I'm not sure if it would be better just left as it is, like some one-shot's should be, but I would have loved to got to have known the characters better. I dunno) and...thankyou for sharing, and all that.

Tigaroo chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
cute. very.
PindrakeCake chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
ah. so cute! loved it.
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