Reviews for His Slave |
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![]() ![]() Hi, bye! |
![]() ![]() That sex scene was so cringey... I suggest that before you write your next smut story, read some erotic novels (no i don't mean yaoi) to get better as an author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good one |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue. I;m very curious to see where this plot goes. |
![]() ![]() Great job keep going |
![]() ![]() child abuser! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Anne! (or Anna whatever her name is! I can't remember and I just read it like a minute ago) Rape is not cool, kids. Hope she gets some love from her luteniant…in more ways than one and I don't just mean sex! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Anne! (or Anna whatever her name is! I can't remember and I just read it like a minute ago) Rape is not cool, kids. Hope she gets some love from her luteniant…in more ways than one and I don't just mean sex! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sucks. Raping isn't fun, duh. Media and sex these days. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( It's an awsome story but I feel sorry for her poor girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! i love it! no, i like your detail...! use more in the *good* parts-if you know what i mean! MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you don't write more I'm gonna find you and bite the crap out of you. Thank you for the great story. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Good, brief, nice sex scenes. It made me wet. Please, write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How old is Anne? Post More Soon :) :) |