I had to smile at some points. And the story was so true. I don't have any experience with anything of it, but I'm way old enough to give my opinion the story was nicely written and very realistic. Good job.

Lis

Beautiful job with this... more young people should get this message. Its much more effective IMO then having an overweight gym teacher trying to scare you with thoughts of STDs.

My Gosh .. . this story was really intense. Wow . .. really, the ending part of this one-shot was -moving. And I, myself, felt like the main characer in this story who was used by her BF who had fcked her out of a 'WAGER' between his friends. GOSH! THE RESPECT GUYS HAVE FOR THE FEMALES! THIS is why I am writing 'Queen of Thieves,' about a lady -who will not allow SUCH FCKING GUYS TO TREAT HER LIKE THAT. Your story has jsut inspired me on how my main character should act towards guys...strong...and not stupid. But once again, I love this story! It's one thing to always hear about these situations happening to teens...but reading it from a fiction such as this...its given me second thoughts of my wistful desires for guys. -_-;; Bravo!

Really sad because its so true. Sometimes I kinda hate the whole teen soceity we have where everything is about sex and the pressure thereis for young people to do it. I have done so many things I've regretted when I've been drunk and I still am making those mistakes and regretting it. It does make you feel like such a slut and so on. This is well written and you really prove your point. But I try and keep to my idea that you should never regret anything you've done you should just learn from it(I find it hard to believe it too). Well God that was an essay. But good story.

Opal Fairy x

I know its suposed to be an R-rated story, but you should seriously put it under 'Humor' instead

I really good story... and it's sad because it's not only 16 year olds making this mistake, but also 14 and 15 year old done.