Okay, so I just read your entire story and I loved it! It was cute, and romantic, but not to romatic, and it had a lot of drama. That can sometimes be a bad thing, but I found that you did it all so realisticly and it was believable drama. So, yeah, I really, really liked it! :)

I have a feeling I'm really going to like this story...:)

This chapter was wild! Xena meets the Outsiders or something.

Yay! Mr Montgomery! I love him! He's so much fun! Oh, and I loved me Alex said, "Kiss me, Adrian." So much emotion!

I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIS ONE! the way adrian went back and forth and back and forth between feelings for alex and jason...and nicky, meg, isaac, and owen are truly marvolous characters! isaac especially! lol, well, great job and keep it up!

-amber

I think Alex interacts with Adrian more in this version...and he seems more human. I don't know. In the last version, he seemed a little more callous and faraway. Untouchable, you know? Lol, but damn do you love writing about jerks

Justin opened his mouth, but Alex cut him off with a wave. Lips pursed, Justin grabbed Bri's arm and hauled her into the house. A little later, they all heard him screaming. Adrian soaked up every expletive Justin hurled at his sister.

screaming sounds a little odd when used on guys. yelling would have sounded better.

this is probably the most dramatic, roller-coaster-y story i have ever read. Seriously when i think back, reading the first chapters seem like a distant memory to me. :) Good Job! just a question but this was your what story? 3rd? 4th? i want to know since the quality of writing is superb! :)

This was really amazing. I loved it! :)

Myrika,

What can I say? I've read this and the Rudux and I must say both are brilliant! They've both had me hooked and I've loved the sories so much!

Your an amazing author!

God damn. That was amazing.

Wow.

That's all I really can say.

Now I just hope I'll make it to work on time (I stayed up all night reading this story). Redux is the edited version right? I believe I'll go check that out...tomorrow!

-Amy-Kinnz-

Fantastic story, very intriguing!

wow. i think this chapter was brilliant. and issac, especially, blew me away.

or rather your writing blows me away :]

Definitely a good story. The one thing I noticed is that you always develop you characters, which is probably my favorite facet of your writing. There were a few thing I didn't like about this story, which is why I'm anxious to read the redux.