Reviews for Until Tomorrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hddfihdsiufhsiduhf AMAZING. I loved it. It was wondrous :] You're a great writer, just like Dirty-Angel-Toes :] I liked your story very much and if I have time later today I'll read your other story :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. :( This is so fucking sad. And I love it. I feel like crying. : |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...creepy...so a sequel a available? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolutely perfect. I love it. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! so tops my favorites about stalkers... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. That's all can say just wow. so deep... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wah that was good! i really wanna know why and how he hurt him. obviously its to do with the scar, but ugh. he is extremely creepy and stalkerish though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to cry. I don't really know what to say. I mean, perhaps some of the expression in the first couple of lines could be a little better, but that really doesn't matter because the whole piece is just saturated in this heavy emotion that's honestly just heartbreaking. And wow. Stalker fics usually carry some sort of underlying creepiness. I mean, even when they're biased towards the stalker character, and you really feel for their side of things, there's still this sense of unrest at the perversion of the activity itself. But you know, I never really got that with this. I don't know, the infatuation seemed, I guess, to have a tragedy but also a purity about it that negated all the creepy connotations of stalker behaviour. I think perhaps it was because it was so clear that the obsession was not really an obsession but stemmed from an absolute, devastating love that the protagonist had. Whereas usually these behaviours arise from having obsessive, perhaps neurotic, qualities to begin with, the protagonist seemed to have been reduced to this state by his love, which I guess is the real tragedy of the story. It was beautiful. I'd say more again, but this is already long, and probably incomprehensible for the most part...just so long as you get the part where your awesome...your bio says it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Normally, I would think 'yesterday' romance is sad and I would bawl my eyes out for the main character because it's so damn tragic... but this is simply disturbing and creepy. Lol, not the story, the stalker. Well, then I guess the story is too. Haha. But seriously, notice the way he talks and thinks... *shiver* I don't know. Just, someone psychotic, no matter now devoted and stuff, doesn't really provoke my sympathy. Don't get me wrong, I don't mean the neurotic or psychotic disorders; those I totally understand. I mean plain insanity or obsession, it's just, scary. And come on, nobody should need to deal with it. Anywho, let's hope the police is on speed dial. Gosh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how creepy. yet how sad...nicely written and good i feel really bad for the main character, but uh, there are such things as privacy and laws...which can be kind of over rated anyway, haha. :smirks: not that you care but yes, i AM one of those people with curiosity problems (way too nosy) but luckily i've never wanted to go into stalking; i don't think i'd be very good at it anyway...oh yeah, love your pen name :D |
![]() ![]() Dude you deserve more reviews these are bloddy awesome though a review like mine is pointless cause I never say why, only that I do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That's really good! I take it it's a one-shot? I think you should just leave it at that. It's interesting. It's sparked my interest and curiosity. Killed the cat, I know. It's great how we kinda get to see what Pierre is like but his name is the only one we know. Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() !_! i LOVED it! I'm crying see : !_! That was so perfect and how you just-ugh! It is indescribable! Is there a prequel to this? If not, you should make one explaining what know what? You don't have to, because it works so perfectly like this. Oh! I LOVE YOU! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww sad... I love stalker stories, but they never end well, do they? I like the short, rhythmic sentences that are one sentence paragraphs unto themselves. They create a sense of detachment from the stalkee, from the stalker's own life, from reality itself. I also like how we get very little insight into this Pierre fellow and the stalker's current life, because the stalker is still really living in the past and that's all we see because it comsumes him so. And only a crazy lovesick stalker would beat off to his ex fucking someone else... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I just say that you are an AMAZING writer? I couldn't even stop to review until I had read everything that you've written! There's this level of emotion in each of your stories that makes everything so unique, so fresh that I need more. I urge you to update quickly! |