Reviews for Most Haunted
jekodama chapter 8 . 8/2/2006
I think you shouldn't write a sequel to this, it's awesome like it is, the way she ends insane (or the way the others think that she is insane) is perfect. I do think that you can polish the ending a little more to make it more dramatic, but that's my opinion, and anyway I enjoyed it as it is.
jekodama chapter 7 . 8/2/2006
Great story! the whole thing was spooky! you could have done something else on the ending... it's ok like this, but I don't know... I feel like it could be more dramatic, more scary, more... don't mind me, I'm just rambling.

Hope to read more of your works soon!
jekodama chapter 2 . 8/2/2006
WOW! THAT was not a nice thing to say, now wasn't it, mum?
jekodama chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
O_O (trembling) Now, this is spooky!
cuddle pup chapter 8 . 7/25/2006
This is...interesting. I get the part about her feeling guilty, and the bit about her going insane, but why would her parents think that she was to blame? Or is that just her own twisted conception?-K
Adam101 chapter 8 . 1/30/2006
I prefer this one to some of your other work because basically I like to read this type of thing.

I found this excellent and really enjoyed reading in through to the end.

FOr a sequal I would possibley go a few years into the future and maybe have someone investigating the case go see the mental patient.
ginaaaaaaaaaaaa chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
hello gabby u ok dats really gud goin read sum more in a min but im kinda knacked lol ok im goin now bie bie bie x
kpnuts chapter 8 . 1/25/2006
If you don't get an A* for that the teacher needs shooting.
Atamagaokashii Ookami chapter 8 . 1/7/2006
Wow that was amazing. Sad story but it was really good! I hoep you make a sequel. Maybe it could be about her getting out of there with her brothers help... lame thought i know but only i dead i have. keep up the good work!
Black Spell chapter 7 . 1/5/2006
wow, that was...unexpected...good job, later!
Ilinca Milosan chapter 7 . 1/5/2006
This was a very good story. Best horror story I've read in a long time, keep up the good work!
Black Spell chapter 6 . 1/4/2006
wow...wasn't expecting that...this was awesome, update soon!
peanut1585 chapter 4 . 12/24/2005
thanks for the update i relly enjoyed this chapter. update soon
peanut1585 chapter 3 . 12/21/2005
write more this is a good story i really enjoyed it, hey you think you can read and reveiw my storys the calling dragons of the black flame, and black kitty kitty.
PissedBeyondRecognition13 chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
omg. i love this story. great job. update soon plz!
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