Reviews for Most Haunted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think you shouldn't write a sequel to this, it's awesome like it is, the way she ends insane (or the way the others think that she is insane) is perfect. I do think that you can polish the ending a little more to make it more dramatic, but that's my opinion, and anyway I enjoyed it as it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! the whole thing was spooky! you could have done something else on the ending... it's ok like this, but I don't know... I feel like it could be more dramatic, more scary, more... don't mind me, I'm just rambling. Hope to read more of your works soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! THAT was not a nice thing to say, now wasn't it, mum? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_O (trembling) Now, this is spooky! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is...interesting. I get the part about her feeling guilty, and the bit about her going insane, but why would her parents think that she was to blame? Or is that just her own twisted conception?-K |
![]() ![]() ![]() I prefer this one to some of your other work because basically I like to read this type of thing. I found this excellent and really enjoyed reading in through to the end. FOr a sequal I would possibley go a few years into the future and maybe have someone investigating the case go see the mental patient. |
![]() ![]() hello gabby u ok dats really gud goin read sum more in a min but im kinda knacked lol ok im goin now bie bie bie x |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you don't get an A* for that the teacher needs shooting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was amazing. Sad story but it was really good! I hoep you make a sequel. Maybe it could be about her getting out of there with her brothers help... lame thought i know but only i dead i have. keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that was...unexpected...good job, later! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very good story. Best horror story I've read in a long time, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...wasn't expecting that...this was awesome, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the update i relly enjoyed this chapter. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() write more this is a good story i really enjoyed it, hey you think you can read and reveiw my storys the calling dragons of the black flame, and black kitty kitty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg. i love this story. great job. update soon plz! |