Reviews for Transformation to Me
snarky muffin chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
beautiful work, paige. "I was Jesus in the form of a hobo."
rebeldork chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Wow. This was so pretty and complicated that I had to read it over again. And again. Your poem presents random images, but they make sense, somehow, when they're put together. I feel like I don't know the whole story but I think this is still a great poem.
Gatha chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
I don't think Jesus pretended to be a hobo, but it does remind me of that What if God was One of Us song. I need to find that one. Anything that gets religous panties in a knot isn't half bad. In that context, this is the guy that wanted Jesus crucified, which made him rise up stronger. Put that way, you're livin the Bible. Still, what would have happened if Jesus wasn't crucified? Paradise?

Still, I don't think you should completely blow this guy off. I'm not sure how is acting, but if it's just being friendly you should let him. If he goes places he shouldn't, do feel free make like Ozzie and bite his head off. Preferably in a metaphorical manner.