Reviews for Land of Dreams and Failure
lilyqueen777 chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
your I's are together in a few words :P but other than that...wow sweetie...wonderful poem ]
Unimportant chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Intersting. I especially like your use of imagery.

Great job!
Underground Constellation chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
I like this. Its beautiful. One thing, though. Some of your I's have merged with other words. Its probably a formatting issue, so its fine.
Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Good poem. The land of dreams and failure is a great image.

-Helen
lilyqueen777 chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written
lilyqueen777 chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
hm...i wonder too...i like this poem..only problem is i wanna know more details! but beutifully written