Reviews for Bitter
AmbroseMaximilien chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
"(i’ll still gut you when i’m damn well ready)"

loved this line, made me gigglesnort xD

bitter lover... kiss me darlin'... very contrasting things but they seem so right next to one another!
Silence the Storm chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Great job, the words in italics were really powerful. Keep on writing.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
nicely written. the top seems so verbose yet poetic but the ending didn't really seem to fit. the word 'gut' doesn't really seem to fit in with the style you have incorporated earlier on, but still a fine piece of work you have done :)

-chaos