|Reviews for Laughing House|
| Woggs chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
"Who never giggles / never smiles / just sits there spinning."
Wow. WOW. I hate you. Lol, Coming up with such an original concept... honestly. Are you TRYING to make the rest of us look bad? :p But seriously, those are some nifty lines (nifty?). I really liked the imagery and the lines in parentheses. "We call 'em crazies." Ha. Now you've got me worried about my own mental stability.
And isn't that what great poetry is for? To make you think? HMM.
| AmbroseMaximilien chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
*laughs out loud*
oh shit i'm crazy now...
people in those asylums are not afraid to laugh outloud- i like that concept! _ and i also believe i belong there, but that's a different thing...
(see, i'm getting through the poems! :D)
| kit feral chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
"know that they’ve got benefit and power because they can laugh out loud" I love it! It's so amazingly creative and really makes you think... I just adore it for it's originality! Love the repetition of crazies. Awesome work, keep it up!