|Reviews for Chemicals to Blind|
| Laura chapter 10 . 8/7
That was so good! I loved it so much! Damn...just as the good part was going, cliffie. I actually think Colby is the most hilarious person ever. I laughed like an idiot all through the night reading this. Congrats, my family now thinks I have a mental problem. But I really hope you continue. If anyone flames this story, they are just jealous of your amazing writing abilities. You are so talented and frankly, I'm awed. So please update when you find the time or inspiration.
| sarah chapter 10 . 9/26/2014
UUUUUGH this is such an intriguing story but nooo just as it was getting even better, it hasnt been updated! such a shame, i look forward to an update whenever, if, you continue itM :)
| StickShift chapter 10 . 3/24/2014
This has been an entertaining read. I know it's been years, but please update.
| Deo chapter 10 . 8/27/2013
Just read all 10 chapters posted so far in one go. I'm loving Colby's personality and attitude. He seems to be showing most of the symptoms of someone with schizoid personality disorder – prefering to be alone, not wanting anyone touching him, acting like he's apart from everyone else, feeling uncomfortable around anyone showing strong emotions, finding other people annoying.
Thank you for writing something that I am enjoying so much.
| DalisaY-17 chapter 10 . 5/21/2013
I have to say, for a character with a really whiny personality, Colby's story telling really gets you into the whole deal of it. And the developments between him, Rachel and James take a lot of interesting turns - and how main character deals with the situation, and how slow he is regarding people - it's strangely (?) loveable, really, especially with how you keep playing with the archetype of sassy, anti-social genius with a really bad roster of social skills. Can't wait for the next update! :D
| rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 10 . 4/7/2013
Fantastic! I can't wait for a. Update!
| MrsHellman chapter 10 . 3/31/2013
This is REALLY good; I can't describe it any other way. The way you've portrayed Colby is brilliant and I don't think I've ever stumbled upon a sassier fuck than him. Rachel, James and the other characters' personalities can be improved however. They are a bit plain, though you've created a platform for them to stand upon - which is more than many other stories.
Also, I must say that the summary is a bit misleading. At first I thought this 17-year-old teen we were told were gay would all of a sudden find himself falling for this new friend in this new town - a girl. I was gladly surprised this wasn't the case. Other than that you've done a great job and I truly hope to see more from you one day. May I ask what made you stop writing?
| The Mottled Selkie chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
It's a shame this story dead. The characters are so interesting.
| DeathNoteisREal chapter 10 . 1/1/2013
I'm sorry, but you are being a real fucking tease, doing this. Abandoning this story right at the climax, when Colby finally stops being so oblivious? Are you ever coming back, because I( and about 323 other people) would like to see what happens
| doubtless trouble chapter 10 . 12/30/2012
OH MY MOTHERFUCKING GOD! HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US WITH JUST THIS? PLEASE GOD UPDATE IF YOU CAN (there's no such thing as can't!) and we just have to know what happens next! James is just awesome and sweet and I want to take him home. Colby getting a clue was simply *priceless*. THIS IS AWESOME!
| doubtless trouble chapter 6 . 12/30/2012
Och, dearie, this is brilliant. I have to say I like Colby's foul language, even though I wouldn't want his meanness to be directed to Rachel more than being used in a humourous sense. Just to point out: where we encounter James' piece of dumb fluff, and she asks who Colby is? She says "Whose Colby?" when it should have been 'Who's Colby?'
| klv chapter 10 . 10/7/2012
Um. Are you still alive? Because I would be really sad if you died. You make me laugh. Please come back and write some more? You're fantastic.
| Querinda chapter 10 . 9/29/2012
What a shame this story has been left unfinished! I thoroughly enjoyed reading something that's quite unique where both protagonists are clearly masculine, rather than have one of them characterised with feminine traits. Hopefully you'll find the inspiration to pick up this story again and finish it :)
| maria94 chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
pleaseeeee uploadddd moreeeee meeee liking itttt very much ... hope Rachel and Colby would get togather... Love the story and plot
| Kaitto chapter 10 . 9/10/2012
what is this enddddd?! i'm like shit deep into this reading and the badassery you have at character creation and i'm kicked in the groin by this fucking incompleteness factor. what's this, five year drop off? and finally something above par to read. well whatever, nice story while it lasted.