I was just wondering if you had given up on this story or if you were going to keep going with it in the future? i really want to know what happens. :D

This is a nice story. :D

Good story. I like Andrew, definitely my favorite character. I like how well you describe things. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.

I'm going to risk sounding like a twat and ask: What does he mean 'shake it'? And is the arm around the shoulder thing foreshadowing?

I think I missed a few chapters... Oh well, extra big dose then!

I sense that slash is getting near, and to that I say, "YAY!" It's what we all want. And, by now, I assume it's going to be with Shaughn, especially considering Jake's whole astrology spiel.

I really liked this last chapter. I thought it was good. And I'm kind of glad you're starting to direct us away from liking Salice so that we are not in any way opposed to the slashy goodness when it comes. Hee, hee, can't wait for more.

I never expected it to be that bad! I mean...a bunch of thugs shot her just because she wouldn't let them in? That's just too much. I'm glad that he had people around him willing to listen but I doubt he should be telling the story again anytime soon...with those type of reactions. I'm still kinda in shock...

Hey!

I know i really dont need to tell you AGAIN, but what the hell...I'm going to anyway!

Your story is totally rocking my little Australian socks! I remember how you were so hesitant about writing this story, and now look how far you've come with it! Your development of Andrew is just outstanding. From the broody teenage angst-filled boy at the start, you really get to see his lighter side. You pull him off wonderfully, as well as all the other characters. Introducing Shaughn was an awesome idea, as it throws in mystery. NOW who's Andrew going to go for? Jake? Salice? Shaughn? Ms Thomas? We just dont know!

I know this is probably just another useless ramble, but i want to encourage you to keep going. You've got a good thing going here, and i know its only going to get better.

Loves and kisses and a packet of confetti,

Tarz ;)

i like how this story is working. i totally don't know what's going to happen, which makes me happy. keep writing!

SERENITY! i

Shaughn's a cool guy but I'm happier that Jake got a whole scene. It's been so long since his and Andrew's study sessions...

this is really good. I honestly don't know where it's going because it isn't so cliche. good job update soon.

i like it so far. :)

Great! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Update soon! I love Jake and Shaughn so either way it will be good. Is it wrong that i dislike Salice? Well, i'll look forward to the next chapter.

Your adoring fan X

Yay there'll be a new character. That's always interesting.

I definitely think you've set up the whole Andrew/Salice thing enough. And, generally, if you're getting bored, it probably means that the readers are too. So, please, bring on the slash! You know that's what we're all waiting for.

Anyway, I think this story is coming along well. It has really evolved since the first chapter, and the writing keeps getting better.

I would leave a more lengthy review than this, but...eh, you know. I look forward to the next chapter!