Reviews for Chloe
elasticbobaturtle chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Whoah. I have the same name as a cat. How...cool. :D But anyways. The only thing I would try to do is change up the sentence structure a little...I think the rhythm gets a bit monotonous, but maybe it was done on purpose (?) I'm not sure. Good job, and keep writing. D
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
The limiting yourself to a certain number of words is both difficult and productive to future progress as you limit yourself, which makes you choose words wisely. This is descriptive without being overly specific. It does create a picture of a cat well. Sorry nothing real constructive, but keep chosing forms that challenge you and your writing style, as it gets you out of your typical notions, tendencies, and forms.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
your cat sounds adorable. i always wanted a cat..and a dog. don't you think hot dog is the coolest name for a dog? haha.

good job.