Reviews for On Why It's Better to Just Be the Penguin
Firefly88 chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
The metaphors and similes in this are so good! I agree though that the ending is a bit confusing. I think its her behaviour in the last stanza that I find confusing.
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
sad and touching. love the vocab in this tho i find the ending a little confusing. otherwise, great intro and altho unusual, a great style too! keep writing,

mez