Reviews for Rude Awakening
searchlight chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Aside from a few punctuation problems and name flow...great going! Is there any chance you're going to flesh it out more in the future? It's such an interesting idea that you could make it into a multi-chapter story prett easily. Describe more about his life before "waking up", more about his ordeals and learning to cope in the "real world" and then have something snap like the whole straw that broke that camel's back to make him want to leave again...even if the alternative is death. I would just really love to read more...such a cool subject...-searchlight